Haiku poetry game!

[Gypsy108]

in the stippled light
intoxicating scent of
jasmine lingering

 

[Gypsy108]

jasmine lingering
as she drove off the mesa
flying through the air

 

[Dingfelder]

Flying through the air --
and what else would you fly through? --
landing on my feet.

 

[crofter]

Landing on my feet,
Snowflakes sift down blanketing
The frozen red earth.

 

[Gypsy108]

and what else would you fly through? --

echos of loneliness ?

(i just finished watching THELMA & LOUISE   ) For the 4th time....

 

[crofter]

The frozen red earth
and echoes of loneliness
Are behind me now.

 

[Gypsy108]

are behind me now
or is it my arse that is
she echoed away

 

[Gypsy108]

she echoed away
in the canyons of her mind
then there was a gong

 

[Gypsy108]

then there was a gong
chasing her demons away
a lotus blossomed

 

[outermostsoul]

A lotus bloomed
Deep in the depths of the wild
Uniquely alone

 

[Gypsy108]

uniquely alone
amongst the gravel and stone
the super freak roam

 

[Dingfelder]

Okay let's try to keep the "thread-killer" last lines out of our poems. We need to be able to progress one post to the next. That's part of the job.
Can we get a re-do with a last line that encourages something to follow it please?

 

[Gypsy108]

the super freak roam
the wide open space their home
riding on the wind

 

[travelaround]

Riding on the wind
Eagles dominate the sky
Their eyes are watchful.

 

[Gypsy108]

their eyes are watchful
always looking for their prey
in the light of day

 

[travelaround]

In the light of day
What's lost is re-discovered
Vision is precious.

 

[crofter]

"Vision is precious"
Lisped the rose snapper snapping,
"Parasites are too."

 

[Gypsy108]

parasites are too
dependent on everything
like mother and child

 

[crofter]

Like mother and child
Older gets younger until
Kids are the parent

 

[Gypsy108]

kids are the parent
trying to keep me in line
rebelling is fun