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The Blamer Finds Faults

Always Fails To Look Within

To See Their own Flaws
 
To see their own flaws
mirrors need the answers that
they were built to ask
 
They were built to ask

Hey come out and play with us

Oh No!...Tag, You're It!
 
Wildly laughing so,

She said, no silly dilly...

Big trucks are for girls
 
Love that one.

Please for the sake of whoever follows, do leave a last line that is not especially difficult to work with or outright confounding. That's part of the game.
 
to get to the top
you're going to do some climbing
but just don't look down

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you will see blue sky
do not forget that, my son
on a cloudy day

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Okay, remember to leave a last line that is easy for somebody to work with. Half the game is to make it easy for the next person to continue.

Spores of forest lush
The drunk mushroom doffs its cap
as the forest laughs
 
as the forest laughs
at a million ironies
nature gets a joke

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in a hoot of hope
the sun rays pierce the branches
the trail ahead is brighter
 
that was 577, not 575, so I'm going to use it this time, with that reminder.

The trail ahead is brighter
after its cold dark seasons
nourished in silence
 
Nourished in silence

Still introspection

The soul energized

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Oops, screwed that one up, sorry.

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