Haiku poetry game!

[Dingfelder]

blue heron finds fish
surging through its green waters;
red fire keeps me dry.

 

[notsosure]

red fire keeps me dry
swine try to rule with mere words
showing us soul lack

 

[travelaround]

showing us soul lack
creatures of darkness emerge
deep forest legends

 

[1shemp]

Man, this is some strange **** for poetry.

 

[crofter]

Deep forest legends
Dry cedar wash travellers
Call to each other.

 

[travelaround]

Call to each other
over the fence out back now
all the towns are closed.

 

[tutufox]

all the towns are closed
preparing celebrations
happiness arises there

 

[crofter]

all the towns are closed
preparing celebrations
happiness arises there

@tutufox
The haiku lines are 5-7-5. You did lines of 5-7-7, so I will make some changes to continue.  -crofter

 

[crofter]

Happiness rises
With the sun, orange, red, then blue.
Bird song awakens.

 

[tutufox]

@tutufox
The haiku lines are 5-7-5. You did lines of 5-7-7, so I will make some changes to continue.  -crofter

:thumbsup: mahalo, crofter

 

[crofter]

:thumbsup: mahalo, crofter

No'u ka hau'oli, tutufox.
-crofter

 

[Dingfelder]

bird song awakens
our spring landscape glistening
in dawn's deep fresh breath

 

[tutufox]

in dawn's deep fresh breath
i sit in awe of gaia
breathing in healing

 

[notsosure]

Breathing in healing

douse small black hearts with big mouths

they need to God

 

[tutufox]

they need to god (gods)
"looking for a heart of gold
and i'm getting old"

 

[travelaround]

And I'm getting old
but so are we all, neil
inevitable

 

[tutufox]

inevitable
impressionable in love
intelligible

 

[Dingfelder]

Intelligible
whisperings between the leaves
when I'm half awake.

 

[travelaround]

When I'm half awake
part of me is still sleeping
yes, I must decide.

 

[crofter]

Yes I must decide 
Autobiographical 
Or a lesser tome?