Haiku poetry game!

[Gypsy108]

LOL

 

[travelaround]

We posted at the same time!

So..

Shut the window
Open the doors to the wind
Sing hallelujah!


Edit:
Open... turned to shut which is what you posted...

 

[Gypsy108]

Sing hallelujah!
we are having fun...aren't we ?
i know i sure am 

 

[travelaround]

I know I sure am
Flying beyond all of this,
Beyond ordinary.



Edit to say.. my counter is off. Sorry!

 

[Dingfelder]

Beyond ordinary,
I return to find my
home, untouched, again.

 

[notsosure]

home untouched again
not tied to outcome, dethrone
the mind, value heart

 

[travelaround]

The mind, value heart
Confidence they still exist
Life surprises you.

 

[Gypsy108]

life surprises you
the universe in chaos
everything perfect

 

[travelaround]

Everything perfect
Infinite creation loved
Lighted hearts around.

 

[Gypsy108]

lighted hearts around
beating to the tune of love
singing light my fire

 

[notsosure]

singing light my fire
itchy dry skin, ice cream head-
ache, turn earth, solstice!!!!!

 

[crofter]

"....I believe in the sun
Even when it's not shining
I believe in love
Even when I feel it not
I believe in God
Even when He is silent...."


found after World War II on a wall in one of the camps, and now given voice round the earth.   ~crofter

 

[travelaround]

Ache, turn earth, solstice
Come to where heaven meets land
Beneath the cold tree.

 

[Dingfelder]

Beneath the cold tree
its roots husband messengers:
we will reach warm lands.

 

[notsosure]

We will reach warm lands
That which you are was never
born and cannot die

 

[Gypsy108]

born and cannot die
just look up into the sky
where does it begin

 

[travelaround]

Where does it begin?
The path above the white cliffs
Eternal travel.

 

[notsosure]

eternal travel
difficult to understand
it's easy to judge

 

[Gypsy108]

it's easy to judge
by looking at the beauty
nature is a bitch

 

[travelaround]

Nature is a bitch
Beautiful to look upon
But watch out for thorns.